Line Graph

The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.

Line graph for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about Music Choice and Pop Parade Visits.
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  1. Band 6.5
    Task Achievement
    Band 5.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 7.5

    The graph shows the number of hits to two new music sites on the web, measured in thousands over a period of fifteen days. As far as Music Choice is concerned, the number of visits to the Site fluctuated between 20,000 and 40,000 in the first eleven days, except for Day 3 when they reached 60,000.

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  2. Band 5.5
    Task Achievement
    Band 5.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 5.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.0

    The graph shows people using new music places on the Internet in fifteen days period of time namely personal choice and trendy pop music. The overall trend shows fluctuation with slight Increased towards the end of the period.

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