Bar Chart

The chart below shows the percentage of female employees in three job sectors in Greece from 1990 to 2015. Percentage of female employees 1990-2015

Bar chart for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about Female Employment Sectors in Greece.
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  1. Band 6.5
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    The bar graph compares the ratio of female employees in three job sectors, namely "call centre", "banking and finance" and "customer service" in Greece from 1990 to 2015. Overall, the percentages of women workers in these sectors skyrocketed and in customer service, the highest ratio of female was employed in 2015.

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    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    The illustration outlines the percentages of female employees in the call centre, finance, and customer service jobs in Greece between 1990 and 2015. Overall, women participation in these sectors remarkably improved and almost half of the customer service and call centre jobs were held by female employees in 2015 compared to a meagre 2 to 10 per cent in 1990.

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