For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter: - state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this - give details on how you have benefited from the club - explain why you want to leave
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Dear Mr Anderson, I am writing to inform you that I have decided to discontinue my membership with the 'In-Shape Fitness and Sports Club' effective from 1st September 2025. I owned a basic membership and received numerous advantages from it.
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Dear Mrs Watson, I am a full-time Gold member of your club 'Fitness Shield'. My membership started a year ago, on 5th August 2024, and it is valid for another six months.
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Dear Mrs Watson, I regret to inform you that I can no longer maintain my classic membership with your club from next month onwards. I am Andrew Scott, living a few blocks away from the club and have been a member since the beginning of its journey.
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Dear Mrs Watson, I am a full-time Gold member of your club 'Fitness Shield'. My membership started a year ago, on 5th August 2024, and it is valid for another six months.
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Dear Mr Anderson, I am writing to inform you that I have decided to discontinue my membership with the 'In-Shape Fitness and Sports Club' effective from 1st September 2025. I owned a basic membership and received numerous advantages from it.
- Band 7.0View annotated correction →
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- Band 8.0
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Dear Mr Garner, I would like to express my gratitude to the local yoga club which you designate as a secretary. I immensely enjoyed my association with the club and the benefits I had received from being a full-time member for a year is immeasurable.
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Dear Mr Martin, I have been an exultant member of your club for about 1 year. I first enrolled as a member in 2023, and the next year my membership was upgraded to Silver Associate with a monthly fee of $50, paid every first Monday of the month.
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Dear Mr Hansen, I joined the 'Sports and Social Club' as a full-time student member in 2023. Since then I have paid the monthly membership fees directly to the National Kingshill bank in due time.
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Dear Mr Nielsen, I am writing in regard to the cancellation of my membership at the Philippine Society of Mechanical Engineers club. I have been a Platinum Plus member since 2020, and I have received numerous benefits.
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Dear Mr Robinson, I have been a member of your fitness and wellness club for the last year. I have been immensely benefitted from my membership but unfortunately, I can’t continue it because of my broken legs.