Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Task Response

Band 5.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 5.5

Lexical Resource

Band 5.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

In today's world, healthcare and education are two most important parts of people's life. Further, without proper education and sufficient health care system, a country can’t develop.

Task Response

Band 7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.0

As people have paid taxes to the government, it is believed that they should be provided with free healthcare and qualified education. However, others disagree with the statement, as they think that each individual should be responsible for his or her own health and education.