Opinion Essay

Some people say that international sporting events contribute greatly to peace and stability in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    The impact of international sporting events on peace and stability in the world is a subject of ongoing debate. While some argue that these events contribute significantly to promoting harmony and stability, I hold a different view.

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    Today's world is wobbling under conflicts, terrorism and wars that make global peace a distant reality. Even in this gloomy moment, many people think that international sporting events can play an essential role in restoring global peace and harmony.

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