Opinion Essay

It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaur, dodos …) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

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    Some people believe that the extinction of animals happens naturally and it is not vita l to avoid this global issue before it becomes worse. I completely disagree with this idea because of several reasons discussed in this essay.

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    Some people believe that there are no compelling reasons for us to protect animal species from extinction as it occurs naturally. I personally disagree with this conviction and will support my argument in the essay below.

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