Opinion Essay

Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s lives and should receive more funding. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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  1. Band 7.0
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    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Lexical Resource
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    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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    In today’s growing world, news providers such as television channels, online news handles and newspapers are investing a lot of money on International news coverage neglecting local news. I believe local news is essential to society as it can inform people about happenings around them.

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  2. Band 6.5
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    Today, media houses use most of their funds to cover international news. Although most people believe that local news is more relevant and should receive more funds I strongly disagree with this view.

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