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Nowadays shopping has become a new favorite pastime for young people. What are the reasons for this? should they be encouraged to develop other hobbies?

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    People’s approach toward hobbies is changing dramatically. At present, shopping as a hobby is becoming popular, especially in youngsters.

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    In this modern era, shoping has an integral part of each and everyone’s life. Youngsters are more attracted than older people. and it has almost become their favorite hobby While there are many reasons behind their trend.

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