Opinion Essay

Public transports in many countries have improved. People should use public transport to support pollution control initiatives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

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    Many countries have made improvements in their public transportation systems, and encouraging people to choose buses, trains, or subways can have significant positive effects on the environment. As a result, I strongly agree that using public transport is vital to help control pollution and will discuss the reasons in the following paragraphs.

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    The evolution of infrastructure and technology has revolutionised human living, and public transport is no exception. I believe that people should not drive their own automobiles because there are excellent transport systems all throughout the world, and the reasons I’ve mentioned below back up this belief.

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