Opinion Essay

Some think that governments should tax unhealthy foods to encourage people to eat healthier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    Some think that heavy-handed governmental taxation is the only way to compel healthier eating. In my opinion, while this makes rational sense, its actual effectiveness is questionable.

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    It has been argued that the regime should impose a tariff on eating fast food, which is not beneficial for mankind. This step will stimulate the masses to consume staple food.

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