In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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With the prevalence of fast food in some countries, especially in developed countries like the U.S., an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems. Some people argue that governments should impose a higher tax on such food.
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With the prevalence of fast food in some countries, especially in developed countries like the U.S, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems due to. Some people argue that government should imposing a higher tax on such food.
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In the present era, world’s people are facing the ultimate fact that our young generations are experiencing severe health related illness from the very beginning of their life and it is due to excess junk food consumption. To forbid the worrying condition, the state is approaching some essential steps and one of them is an enhancement of taxes on convenience food.