Opinion Essay

Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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    It goes without saying that the major causes leading the traffic congestion are the high number of vehicles and the development of the economy, so housing and traffic problems are becoming a prominent concern in the modern era. This matter could be resolved when large industries, as well as corporate offices, should move to the suburbs of the country.

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    These days with increasing urban populations, there are major problems with congestion and not only the price but also availability of accommodation in large cities of the world. It seems that one possible solution could be to relocate large companies and factories as well as their respective employees out of these urban areas and into more rural ones.

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