The graphs below show the global robotics market during 2000 and 2025 based on sectors.
Sample Response
The given bar chart and tablebar charts illustrate the size of the global robotics marketglobal sales market in robotics and showconsider four sectors betweenduring 2000 and 2025.
Overall, it is seen from the first graph that sales are rising in 2025 as compared to 2000, however, in the industrial sector, the sales are increasing in 2025 as compared to the other sectors, which is also true in 2000.
In the personal sector, the size of the global robotic market rose from 1 billion dollars in 2005 and will rise in 2025 to 9 billion dollars. In addition, the commercial market is projected to reach $10 billion in 2020the global market has increased in 2020 by 10 billion dollars and is expected to reach approximately $16 billion by 2025shall rise by 2025 approximately 16 billion dollars.
Furthermore, in the industrial sector, the market sizeglobal size for the market in 2000 was $4 billionwas 4 billion dollars and is projected to reach $16 billion in 2020continues to increase in 2020 by 16 billion dollars and is expected to remain the largest sector at $26 billion in 2025will continue to increase in 2025 as compared to others. In the military sector, the market was $2 billionwas at 2 billion dollars in 2000, and is projected to reach $10 billion in 2020which surged to 10 billion dollars in 2010 and is also expected to reach $15 billion in 2025also will rise in 2025 by 15 billion dollars.
Why this response received Band 6.0
The response identifies the overall rise in the robotics market and correctly recognizes the industrial sector as the largest, while its paragraph structure makes the main progression easy to follow. However, coverage is incomplete and sometimes inaccurate, particularly the omitted total-market figures and the incorrect military value for 2010. Prioritize separating the total-market chart from the sector table and verifying every year-value pairing before writing.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
The overview captures the upward trend and industrial dominance, but the total-market chart is scarcely developed and one military figure is seriously inaccurate.
Report key totals from the upper chart, then compare all four sectors using checked values from matching years.
Coherence and Cohesion
The response follows a recognizable introduction-overview-details sequence, though some referents are vague and the two visuals are not clearly separated.
Use one detail paragraph for total market growth and another for sector comparisons, naming each series directly.
Lexical Resource
The vocabulary is adequate for describing trends and sectors, but repetition and awkward combinations such as global sales market reduce precision.
Use concise standard terms such as market size, sector, rose to, and was projected to reach.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Complex forms are attempted, but recurring tense, preposition, and clause-linking errors make several comparisons awkward or ambiguous.
Choose past tense for historical figures and future or projection language for 2025, using one clear comparison per sentence.
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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1
The graphs below show the global robotics market during 2000 and 2025 based on sectors.
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