In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

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In Britain, many elderly people tend to live with fellow elderly people at nursing home. Although most people believe that government funding should be spent to sustain this care, I believe that the family should also provide for their family member.

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At present, most of the elderly population are left under the care of home-cares due to the fact that the younger family members are too busy with their work and could not provide sufficient care and attention for the later. In addition, some of the family members even fail to provide financial support.