More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

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Usages of private vehicles as the main transportation media is rife and has grown abundantly among citizens. This reliance on private cars, somehow, can trigger several impacts, for instances, increasing traffic jam and elevating air pollution.

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In today's modern world, the number of private cars is increasing tremendously following the development of technology. It, inevitably, causes many unanticipated negative consequences on people's lives due to the overreliance on their cars even for a short distance journey.