The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
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The bar chart compares the leisure hours enjoyed by male and female based on the employment status during the year 1998 to 1999. Overall, the bar chart shows the number of leisure hours spent during retirement and unemployment is high when compared to employment period.
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The graph compares the amount of leisure time enjoyed by people of different employment levels in a typical week in the year 1998-1999. Generally speaking, unemployed and retired people, both men and women enjoyed more leisure time than employed people and men compared to women had more time for leisure activities.