The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
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The bar chart compares the leisure hours enjoyed by male and female based on the employment status during the year 1998 to 1999. Overall, the bar chart shows the number of leisure hours spent during retirement and unemployment is high when compared to employment period.
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The bar chart compares the duration of time that men and women with different occupation statuses dedicated to leisure activities in a usual week based on an average between 1998 and 1999. A glance at the graph reveals that unemployed and retired people had more spare time to enjoy than that of others.
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The graph compares the amount of leisure time enjoyed by people of different employment levels in a typical week in the year 1998-1999. Generally speaking, unemployed and retired people, both men and women enjoyed more leisure time than employed people and men compared to women had more time for leisure activities.
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The chart shows the duration of leisure enjoyed by men and women in a typical week in 1998-99, according to their gender and employment status. Generally speaking, male enjoyed more leisure time than women, and employed people had less free time for pastime activities than retired and unemployed people.
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The bar graph illustrates the amount of time that was spent on leisure activities per week by male and female from various employment statuses between 1998 to 1999 period. It is clear that that unemployed and retired man and women had the highest leisure time among the other groups.
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The provided graph presents data on the amount of spare time both Males and Females from different employment status had enjoyed. The data available represents samples from the year 1998- 1999 and number of hours each gender spent on leisure.
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The given graph gives information on the number of leisure hours enjoyed by male and female with different employment status in an average week of the year 1998 and 1999. As is observed from the graph, the male had more free times than the female and employed people enjoyed less free hours than the unemployed or retired persons on an average.
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The column graph outlines the number of leisure hours enjoyed by males and females in a typical week in 1998-1999, according to the gender and employment status. In short, men enjoyed more free time for leisure compared to their female counterparts.
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The bar graph illustrates the duration of free time enjoyed by male and female with various professional status in a typical week in 1998-99. At the first glance, it is clear that jobless and pensioner people had a longer idle time to enjoy and men enjoyed more leisure hours than women.
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The given bar graph depicts the hours of leisure time enjoyed by men and women in a typical week in different employment sectors in the year 1998-99. The first point to note is that, only mild variations between both sexes of free time enjoyment in the given year.