地图题

The maps show the changes of an office building between the present and the future.

雅思学术类 Task 1 地图，主题为 Office Building Redevelopment Plans。
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    The maps provide information about how an office building is going to change in the future. Overall, the building will undergo several changes, including an extension on one side of the building and a significant renovation of the inside of the building with the addition of several new features.

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    The maps compare an office building at the present and its future plan. Overall, the building will undergo several changes, including extension on one side of the building, renovations of rooms and addition of new facilities.

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