The plans below show a college café before it was redesigned and how it looks now.
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Overall, several new facilities were added to the café, while the kitchen, main seating area and toilets remained largely unchanged. Before the redesign, the café had a relatively simple layout.
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The map illustrates the layout of university cafe before its redesign and the current plan for the area. Overall, it is evident that the cafe's underwent several significant changes, including serving area and staff dining rooms with new food and drink facilities and the addition of outdoor seating.
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The plans compare the layout of a college cafe before its redesign with its current arrangement. Overall, the cafe has been made more suitable for customers by adding several food and drink facilities.
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The two plans show the changes made to a college café. Overall, the café has been enlarged and offers more food choices.
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The two plans illustrate how a college café has been changed following a redesign. Overall, the café has become more focused on providing a wider range of food and drink services, while the main indoor seating area remains in the same position.