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The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996.

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    The line graph compares the number of noise complaints to Environment Health authorities made by people in Newtown city between 1980 and 1996. Generally speaking, the highest number of complaints to Environments Health authorities were related to road works.

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    The line graph provides data on the complaints on noise filed to the Newton’s Environmental Health authorities from 1980 to 1996. Overall, the number of complaints made about four noise sources increased over the 16-year period except for domestic noise, which actually declined.

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    The line graph shows the number of complaints received by the Environmental Health Department according to the type of noises heard in the city of Newtown. Overall, the number of complaints lodged about four noise sources increased over the period except for domestic noise, which, in fact, declined.

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