首页雅思 G 类 Task 1 范文College Accommodation Transfer Request

You are a college student in an English speaking country. You share a rented apartment with others but want to move to the college accommodation instead. Write a letter to the teacher in charge of the hostel and explain your intention to move to college accommodation. In your letter: - introduce yourself - give reasons why you are not happy with the current accommodation - explain why you think college accommodation will be better for you

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am a Science major sophomore in your college. I am originally from Brazil and my student ID number is S2-5487.
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am a Science major sophomore in your college. I am originally from Brazil and my student ID number is S2-5487.
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Dear Sir or Madam, The purpose of inscribing this missive is to inquire about the availability of any vacant room to stay in the college hostel. I am facing many obstacles with my current accommodation arrangement and hoping that you would arrange a hostel room for me from the beginning of August 2019.
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