首页雅思 G 类 Task 1 范文Office Health and Working Conditions

You work in an office and have recently been experiencing a health problem. You think that the problem started because of the working conditions in the office. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - Describe the health problem - Explain why you think it was caused by conditions in the office - Suggest what the manager should do to improve the working conditions in the office

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Dear sir, Greeting of the day!! I’m Shriya Mishra Cigna department, employees id:-:-:-:-: want you to address an issue regarding health issue I’m facing while working.
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Dear Mr Smith, As the head of the planning committee of this Company, I’m writing to inform you that our annual conference is set to come off on the 23/12/2021 at the main hall of the ground floor. All necessary preparations are underway to ensure that the annual conference is a success.
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