You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar. In your letter: - ask for information about the seminar dates - ask for details of the programme - ask about accommodation - ask about the cost
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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is John Muller and I have recently noticed an advertisement in a local newspaper regarding a seminar on Labour Laws that you are going to organise in Dubai. I, being an HR professional from Vietnam, would like to participate in this seminar to enhance my knowledge.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Rona Lyn Olivar, an ICU Nurse at the Urdaneta Heart Hospital, located in the province of Pangasinan in the Philippines. I have learned from a colleague that you will conduct an Electrocardiogram Training in Singapore, and I am writing to ask for some information regarding the seminar, and hoping that you would kindly provide it to me.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to participate in the seminar you are going to organise next month in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia. I learned about it from your website and I believe such a seminar will help me perform better in my current job.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am very excited about the seminar on "Risk Management in the Financial Industry" that will be organised by you in Edinburgh, United Kingdom. However, the information, that I received from the advert in a local newspaper, does not include the dates, program outlines, accommodation plan and the cost.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Swathi Reddy, working as a software engineer in India. I have recently learned about your seminar on Ethical Hacking, scheduled to be held in Sydney, Australia in December 2025, through an advertisement in a newspaper.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Aguinaldo Silva, working as a researcher at the University of São Paulo, Brazil for over a decade. I have read in a newspaper that you are going to organise a seminar on 'Automated Neural Networks' and I think it would be helpful for my current research.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in relation to the upcoming seminar on “Testing Automation - Industry Standards”, that you are going to organise in Toronto, Canada in August 2025. I need some details and I am hoping that you will provide those to me.