The best way to provide enough homes in large cities is to build tall apartment blocks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Sample Response
It is often argued that high-rise residentialapartment buildings are the most effective solution to the shortage of housing in major cities. Although tall blocks can accommodate many residentsa large number of residents on a limited amount of landon limited land, I only partly agree because they should be combined with other forms of development.
The main advantage of building verticallyupwards is that land in city centres is both scarce and extremely expensiveextremely expensive and scarce. A high-rise buildingA tower can provide hundreds of flats on a plot where only a few houses could otherwise be built. This may help governments to provide housingoffer homes near workplaces, public transport and schools, instead of forcing people to move to distant suburbs. In addition, flats in high-rise buildingsapartments in large buildings can sometimes be cheaper to heat and maintain because facilities such as car parksparking areas and lifts are shared.
However, relying mainly on tall apartment blocks can create several problems. First, densely occupiedpopulated buildings may put pressure on local roads, hospitals and green spaces if these services are not expanded at the same time. Some residents also find living in very small flats unpleasant, especially families with children who need outdoor areas. In poorer districts, badly managed tower blocks can become unsafe or socially isolated places to liveunsafe or isolated communities. Therefore, simply increasing the number of floors does not necessarily improve people's quality of life.
In my view, high-rise housing is suitable in well-connected central areas, where there is a real lack of land. Nevertheless, city planners should also renovate empty buildings, encourage medium-rise housing and develop smaller towns with good transport links. This approach would provide more homes while avoiding excessive concentration of housing in one part of the cityexcessive concentration in one part of a city.
In conclusion, tall apartment blocks are an important way to address urban housing shortages, but they are not the best solution in every situation. They need careful planning and should form part of a wider housing strategy.
Why this response received Band 8.0
The response presents a consistently clear, well-balanced position and develops both the benefits and limitations of high-rise housing with relevant, logically connected explanation. Its main limitation is that some support remains general rather than being explored through a particularly concrete or distinctive example. The highest-priority improvement is to deepen one central point with more specific illustration or analysis so that the argument becomes even more compelling.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
The response fully addresses the extent question with a clear qualified position and well-developed, relevant reasons throughout.
Deepen one key reason with a more specific real-world illustration to make the support even more persuasive.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ideas progress logically through well-focused paragraphs, with cohesive devices used naturally and without distracting repetition.
Refine the transition into the proposed wider strategy so its relationship to the preceding drawbacks is even more explicit.
Lexical Resource
A wide and precise vocabulary is used flexibly to discuss housing density, infrastructure, planning, and quality of life.
Add occasional more sharply differentiated wording when contrasting high-rise, medium-rise, and regional development options.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of complex sentence structures is handled accurately, with consistently clear and controlled punctuation.
Continue varying clause openings and sentence rhythms while maintaining the same high level of grammatical control.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
The best way to provide enough homes in large cities is to build tall apartment blocks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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