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Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

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    When it comes to school age, there are some people who believe that it is better manner for the young children to stay home until their six or seven. On the contrary, in others opinion, the more school age would be earlier, the more benefits children would achieve.

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    Children are born proactive in the present generation, hence every parent is quite enthusiastic to make their child grow faster. It is the responsibility of the parents to send their children to school at the right age.

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