Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they often do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
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In these days, sports channels telecast almost all major sports events from across the world. It has become a cash cow of many television networks.
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Television has become the state of the art entertainment tool and people may subscribe to their preferred channels at a low cost. However, some critics warn that teens would not engage in sports once they start watching sports channel fervently.
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Whether live sports on television avert youngsters from actually playing sports in real life is a controversial issue and deserves a thorough discussion. In my opinion, participating in different sports is far useful than only enjoying it on television, though watching a few games does not hurt.
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Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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Some people believe that professional athletes serve as positive role models for young people, while others argue that their behavior both on and off the field has a negative influence. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well-educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
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Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t. What is your opinion on that?
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