Some people believe that children should grow up in the city while others believe the countryside is a better choice. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy for them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?
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The topic of whether keeping pets is beneficial or detrimental to children has long been a subject of debate. While some argue that having pets can bring numerous advantages to a child's life, others express concerns about the potential risks and negative impacts.
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Allowing children to have pets has been a topic of debate for many years, with some people arguing that it is highly beneficial for children, while others opining that it is detrimental and unhealthy for them. This essay explores both perspectives and gives reasons why this could be harmful to children.
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Some individuals support keeping pets around young children as they think it is beneficial while others oppose the idea citing pet-related injuries and fatalities in recent times.
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The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these views?
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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? Write not less than 250 words.
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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the cause and effects of widespread drug abuse by young people. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered? What is your view? Discuss.
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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
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