Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered? What is your view? Discuss.
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Obesity among children has dramatically increased over the last few years in developing countries. This is an alarming situation, which should be controlled at its earliest.
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Over the last few decades, some countries have reported an overall increase in the average weight of people with more percentage in children and adolescents.
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In this modern era, children, unfortunately, endure some ailments that they are known as adults aches such as overweight. There are various reasons behind it.