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Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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    Some People are of the view that happiness is directly proportional to economic success, while others have an opinion that many different factors are also responsible for leading a happy life. Living a joyful life has a different meaning for every individual.

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    Many are of the belief that happiness is a result of financial success, while others feel there are more crucial factors. In my opinion, a certain degree of financial stability is a basic requirement for happiness but is less important overall than one’s family and health.

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