Process Diagram

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

Process diagram for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about Sugar Production from Sugar Cane.
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  1. Band 7.5
    Task Achievement
    Band 7.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 8.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 7.5

    Overall, a total of seven steps is seen from the production, including harvesting, crushing and separating. It is also evident that manufacturing sugar from sugar canes is a capital-intensive process, despite using only one ingredient.

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  2. Band 7.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    The diagram illustrates how sugar is produced from sugar cans. As clearly can be seen, there are seven various stages in this process demanding specific machinery and skilled workers.

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