Bar Chart

The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.

IELTS Writing question

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  1. Band 5.5
    Task Achievement
    Band 5.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.5

    The given illustration gives data on the number of mobiles and land phone users in six different countries namely: Canada, US, Germany, Denmark, UK, Sweden and Italy.

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  2. Band 5.5
    Task Achievement
    Band 5.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 5.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.5

    The given bar graph depicts the mobile or land phone numbers per 100 people in different seven countries. The first point to note is that highest number of phones used by the people in Denmark.

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