Bar Chart

The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, those three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.

Bar chart for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about Computer Package Downloads Over Five Weeks.
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  1. Band 5.5
    Task Achievement
    Band 5.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 5.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.5

    The given bar chart represents the information regarding downloading computer packages from the internet within five weeks and data on how many times per week these packages are downloaded. Overall, the demand for the Net package was low every week compared to others.

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  2. Band 5.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 5.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 5.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.0

    The chart illustrates the three different language programs installed on the computer by the users in five weeks from the Internet. Overall, it is immediately apparent from the chart that the active X software was the most downloaded program in five weeks.

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