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The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006.

Table for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about Worldwide Mobile Phone Market Share.
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    The table illustrates the proportion of the market share of mobile phone services around the globe for manufacturing usages in 7 different companies, Nokia, Motorola, Samsung, L.G, BenQ Mobile and others between 2005 and 2006. Overall, from 2005 to 2006, Nokia was the most popular mobile phone service provider, while BenQ Mobile had the least market share among those companies.

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    As you know, mobile phones are the basic need for humans in today’s world. Everyone has a mobile phone, from Children to old aged people and there are many different companies of mobile phones in the market to provide different types of phones.

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