You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days of purchase, it has stopped working. You spoke to the company representative a week ago but it has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - introduce yourself - explain the situation - say what action you would like the company to take
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- Task Achievement
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am David Fisher, writing to express my concern about a recent purchase I made from your company. Even after contacting your company a week ago, I am yet to get any solution.
- Band 8.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 7.5
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 8.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.5
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 8.0
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Emilly Brooks, and I am writing to you regarding a recent purchase I made from your company. I purchased a new iPhone 15 Pro mobile phone from your store last week.