You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: - explain why you are writing - express concern about the missing card - ask them what they intend to do
6 Corrections
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- Band 6.5View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 7.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.5
- Lexical Resource
- Band 6.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.0
Dear Mr. Aquino, I am writing in connection with your letter asking me to acknowledge receipt of the new bank card.
- Band 8.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 8.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 8.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 8.0
Dear Sir / Madam I am writing in connection with a missing or stolen debit card from your bank. This is an urgent matter as the bank card could prove dangerous in the hands of the wrong person.
- Band 5.5View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 4.5
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 6.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.0
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I have recently received a letter from your bank, and an envelope which was supposed to contain my new bank card. Unfortunately, there was no card in the envelope when I opened it.
- Band 7.5View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 8.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 7.5
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I received a letter from my bank today, which was supposed to contain my new bank card. Unfortunately there was no bank card enclosed in the envelope when I opened it.
- Band 6.5View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 7.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.5
- Lexical Resource
- Band 6.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.5
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I was delivered an empty envelope which was supposed to carry my debit card issued by the Northshire branch of your City Bank. Since I have not received any card, I can not acknowledge its acquisition.
- Band 7.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.5
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 7.0
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I have recently received a letter from your bank, and an envelop which was supposed to contain my new bank card. Unfortunately, no card was enclosed in the envelope when I opened it.