Home General Task 1 SamplesEmergency Department Service Complaint

You took your young child, who had severe stomach pains, to a hospital Emergency Department. You waited almost four hours before a doctor treated your child and other staff constantly ignored you. Write a letter to the Hospital Registrar. In your letter: - describe the long wait for treatment - explain how the other staff treated you - complain about the service you received

Timed practice

Finish under time and see where you stand on each of the four criteria.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my utter dissatisfaction with your hospital's emergency service that I experienced last Monday when I took my six-year-old daughter to your hospital. I am hoping you will take this complaint seriously and take the necessary actions.
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Task Achievement
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Lexical Resource
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Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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Dear Sir or Madam, Two days ago I took my younger daughter to your hospital due to her sudden and relentless stomach pains but was very disappointed with the service I received. When my daughter needed emergency care, she and I were continually neglected.
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