Positive or Negative Development Essay

Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?

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    Nowadays, mobile phones can be used to receive business or personal calls anytime. From my perspective, I strongly believe that the positives and negatives of this trend are equal.

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    Rising ownership of mobile phones facilitates interaction for work and personal purposes regardless of time constraint. This revolution in communications exerts several benefits on both individuals and society, but I believe that these merits are overshadowed by its demerits.

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