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Opinion Essay

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Band 6.5
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.5
    Lexical Resource
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    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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    It is true that several people have changed themselves to be a better person after they had been released from prison. And it is believed that they are better in giving advice to young people about the negative effect of crime.

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  2. Band 6.5
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    It is true that we should hate crimes, not the criminals as they are also the human being. Evidence shows that good individuals are forced to commit a crime and are convicted and many ex-prisoners become normal members of our society.

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