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Opinion Essay

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Band 8.0
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    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Certain concerned citizens believe that prices should be raised to counter the high sugar content in various food and drink products. In my opinion, this solution may have a marginal impact but other reforms would engender greater progress.

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  2. Band 8.0
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    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Lexical Resource
    Band 8.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 8.0

    Many processed foods and drinks are packed with sugar and this leads to many health issues. I agree that, to reduce sugar consumption, sugar-packed products should be sold at a higher price.

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