Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t. What is your opinion on that?
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Professional sportsmen and women are and have always been inspirational idols in young people’s life. In my opinion, youngsters take examples from them and attempt to become successful forthcoming people of the same type.
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As we know sports are very important in day to day life. Youngsters get more attraction towards sports and try to play the same as professional athletes.
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Each person has one or many role models in his or her life. They prefer to imitate style, method of life and skills from their role models.