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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

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  1. Band 6.0
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    In my opinion, there is nothing wrong in depending on computers. They play a major role in our daily life.

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  2. Band 6.0
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    We are well aware of the latest technology and gadgets used around us. In all the electronic gadgets use of computers has been increased a lot in our day to day life.

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    The invention of the computer is referred to as an epic among the other technological breakthroughs of last century. The role of computers in today’s lifestyle has reached such dizzy heights than anyone could ever imagine!

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    The invention of the computer is referred to as an epic among the other technological breakthroughs of last century. The role of computers in today’s lifestyle has reached such dizzy heights than anyone could ever imagine.

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