Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Task Response

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Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.5

Lexical Resource

Band 7.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 7.5

While some argue that building more sports facilities is the best possible method of improving public health, others believe that this approach is not very effective, and other actions are needed.