Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms or sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Subsidized gym or sports club membership is often offered by employers as a way to improve the health of their staff, and as a result, their productivity. While some employers think it will transform their employees to be more healthy and productive, others tend to disagree.

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Sound health plays an indispensable role in our life and work performance. That is why many employers seek ways to offer perks, such as gyms or sports clubs sponsorship, with a belief that healthier and happier employees will become more productive at work while many other employers simply do not invest in it.

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Different employers hold varying views regarding whether providing their employees with subsidized memberships to gymnasiums or sports centres will have a favourable effect on the health and general work performance of their staff. In this essay, I will discuss both views.