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The diagram below shows the development of the cutting tool in the Stone Age.

雅思学术类 Task 1 题目图片，主题为 Stone Age Cutting Tool Development。
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    The diagram illustrates the development of the cutting tool from two different time periods within the Stone Age. Although the overall size and shape of the two cutting tools are very similar, the cutting tool from the latter time period shows some distinct improvements.

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    The pictures describe the cutting tools created by our ancestors at two different ages. Tool A was made approximately 1.4 million years ago.

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