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The graphs show enrolment in different colleges in the Higher Colleges of Technology in 1999.

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    The graphs presented give information about the number of students enrolled in 10 different Higher Colleges of Technology (HCT) branches across UAE by gender and the level of college education they achieved. Overall, Dubai Women’s College has the highest number of enrolment among all the colleges while Ras Al Khaimah Men’s College has the least number of students.

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    The given graphs show the students’ enrollment in the Higher College of Technology for the year 1999. As is presented in the graphs, Dubai University had the largest number of male and female enrolled in 1999 and majority of those students achieved their certificates than other degrees.

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