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The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

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    The bar chart delineates the ratio of pupils who continue their education for the benefit of their career and from passion, based on their age groups while the line graph reveals the support those students got from their companies as a form of financial support and time off.

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  2. 6.5分
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    The charts depict why students at different ages study and also give information about the support (time off or financial aid) they received from their employers. Overall, it is evident that young people (under 40 years) study because of their career prospects while the majority of older people study because of their interest.

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    The diagrams outline why students from different age groups study and the support they received from their employers. Overall, having a good career is the main reason for young to study while it is personal interest for grown-ups.

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  4. 6.5分
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    6.5分
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    6.5分
    词汇资源
    6.5分
    语法范围与准确性
    7.0分

    The graphs illustrate why people from different age groups continue their studies and the support employers offered to them in terms of financial and time off. Overall, it is obvious that there is a decreasing trend among students who study for their profession as they become older, whereas the reverse is true for those who study for passion.

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