A large company in your area plans either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team - summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts - say how you think the company should spend the money
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to convey my opinion regarding your generous initiative to invest in the local community, either by sponsoring a children’s sports team for two years or by funding two open-air concerts. Both options would bring great value to our area, but I believe that sponsoring the sports team would have a more lasting impact.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to convey my opinion regarding your generous initiative to invest in the local community, either by sponsoring a children’s sports team for two years or by funding two open-air concerts. Both options would bring great value to our area, but I believe that sponsoring the sports team would have a more lasting impact.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to express my appreciation for your decision to spend money for the benefit of our community - either to sponsor a local juvenile sports team or to arrange two concerts.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to profoundly thank your organisation for the decision to spend money for the benefit of our community. I deeply appreciate your readiness to sponsor a local junior sports team or alternatively arrange two open-air concerts.