Some argue younger people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while others think this is a good idea. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Important government positions in most of the countries are taken up by experienced people. Some believe that young people are more suitable for these jobs, others however, are not in favor of assigning positions to young crowd.
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GovernmentYoungsters nowadays are getting drifted towards government jobs. Whether it’s a duty with normal shift or holding a position in the ministry, they can be seen everywhere.
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People have divided opinions when it comes to young people's employment in important government jobs. While some think that it is advantageous, others completely oppose it.
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In recent times, there has been a noticeable increase in young individuals assuming significant roles within government institutions. While some argue that this development is positive, others hold the belief that it is neither appropriate nor desirable.
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Government jobs at key positions are very critical and require serious responsibilities. Decision making done through important positions creates a long-term impact on the growth of the country in different sectors.