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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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    Today, individuals believe that consumption of junk food has resulted in several negative health issues. With this increase, many people opine that educating the public could resolve the issue easily, while others are against this notion.

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    Scientific findings have indicated that the excessive consumption of fast food is leading the health of people to deterioration. According to some people, this unhealthy practice can be stopped through education; however, some others have little faith in this solution.

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