The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
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- Task Achievement
- Band 6.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 6.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.0
The provided graph presents data on the amount of spare time both Males and Females from different employment status had enjoyed. The data available represents samples from the year 1998- 1999 and number of hours each gender spent on leisure.
- Band 6.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 5.5
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.5
- Lexical Resource
- Band 6.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.5
The column graph outlines the number of leisure hours enjoyed by males and females in a typical week in 1998-1999, according to the gender and employment status. In short, men enjoyed more free time for leisure compared to their female counterparts.
- Band 6.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 6.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 6.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 5.5
The bar graph illustrates the duration of free time enjoyed by male and female with various professional status in a typical week in 1998-99. At the first glance, it is clear that jobless and pensioner people had a longer idle time to enjoy and men enjoyed more leisure hours than women.
- Band 6.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 6.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 5.5
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 5.5
The given bar graph depicts the hours of leisure time enjoyed by men and women in a typical week in different employment sectors in the year 1998-99. The first point to note is that, only mild variations between both sexes of free time enjoyment in the given year.